雅思A类7.5分感言

2024-11-12

雅思A类7.5分感言(通用5篇)

1.雅思A类7.5分感言 篇一

The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.

It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.

Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.

With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.(193 words, band 9)

雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一:话题重述

段二:概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三:详述特征规律一

段四:详述特征规律二

注意:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,无定论。

a类雅思小作文9分范文分享 饼图题型之游客偏好分析

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

该饼图展示游客参观英国4类旅游景点偏好的调查结果分析。请作答。

2.雅思口语7.5分考生的经验之谈 篇二

As for why we went there, well it was simply because we’re thinking of buying a flat as an investment. You know here in China, this is a very common thing to do, because investing in property is seen as being relatively risk-free. And some friends of ours who had already been there to have a look recommended that we also check it out .So we thought, why not!

Anyway, with regard to what the flat looked like, well basically, it was really nicely decorated, as you can probably imagine, what with it being a show home and all. For example, the floor was mostly marble, and there was a huge chandelier hanging above the dining table. So yeah, it all looked pretty impressive. I mean, even the wallpaper was nice, you know, it was, um… I’m not quite sure how to best describe it, but you could just tell it was really good quality from the feel and texture of it.

The only downside was the price, because I think it was something like twenty five thousand rmb a square metre, so the whole flat came to about four million, or somewhere thereabouts, which was a bit above our budget unfortunately!

高分词汇表达:

show home = 样板房

apartment complex = 小区

So we thought, why not! = 所以我们想,不妨去看看呗!

it was really nicely decorated = 装饰地很漂亮

as you can probably imagine = 正如你可能想像到的

what with it being a show home and all = 毕竟是个样板房

marble = 大理石

chandelier = 枝形吊灯

So yeah, it all looked pretty impressive. = 所以嗯,都看上去很不错!

I’m not quite sure how to best describe it = 我不太清楚怎样描述得最好

you could (just) tell it was really good quality from the feel and texture of it. = 从质感能看得出质量很好

downside = 负面

or somewhere thereabouts = 上下的样子

which was a bit above our budget = 稍微超出了我们的预算

Other useful phrases:

It was on the tenth floor = 在十楼

Floor-to-ceiling windows = 落地窗

Very spacious = 很宽敞

Very cozy = 很温馨

It was open-plan = 开敞式的

Flat-screen TV = 液晶电视

It overlooked the city centre = 俯视着市中心

It had a great view of the city centre

雅思口语Part2话题答案:a popular place where people like to go swimming

You should say:

Where is this place?

When did you first visit this place?

How often do you go to this place?

3.雅思A类阅读备考 篇三

雅思考试无论如何变化,考查语言能力的实质是不会发生改变的,考生在复习的时候首先从单词和语法这两方面重点着力。此处推荐考生在考前至少将一本雅思真题高频词汇书反复背4-6遍,背单词的目的是为了认知,所以讲求短时间多次重复,最终达到看词识意的效果。并且将自己的高中语法书吃透,重点掌握雅思常考语法项目,比如分析句子结构,练习抓句子主干等。熟悉语法的目的是为了识别考题及文中对应处的长难句,所以重点应该放在从句分析和长难句理解上。

2、重视旧题,不忘新题。

由于近年雅思阅读考试中已经出现旧文章“升温”现象,这也不得不引起广大考生对于机经的重视,所以备考时间在两个月以上的考生可以有侧重的回顾机经,重点仍旧放在重复考察多次的文章以及新文章上。且对于一篇文章来说,考生应该重点阅读文章的内容结构回忆而并不是单纯的记忆答案。绝不推荐考生单纯依赖背诵机经进行备考。

3.复习资料不在多,而在于怎么使用。

由于考试中核心题型基本属于方法题(除段落信息配对题外),所以考生应将注意力放在密集的单项训练,培养做题感觉上。训练过程中重点使用《剑桥雅思系列真题》。现今琳琅满目的雅思参考书中,考生往往会盲目挑选一些雅思阅读辅导材料。但是,剑桥雅思真题集系列由于其信度和效度高,取材和题型皆于目前考试接近,因此考生在复习的时候一定要牢牢把握好这套教材,弄清楚每道题目的解法,如果做错要及时分析原因。有时间的同学还可以对这套教材中的文章进行精读,以充分明白雅思选文的题材、方式和常考的词汇。最后再以《剑七》做套题模考训练。

4. 分门别类,各个击破。

雅思阅读和其它英语考试阅读部分最大的区别在于题型多样化,而今年考试的题型分布又再次印证了这种多样化。因此考生一定要在考试之前对各类题型的解题技巧进行彻底的复习。配对题必将成为今后雅思阅读的一个重要题型,而且这类题型对考生的阅读技能和英语基本功都提出了很高的要求,因此考生一定要特别注意这种题型的解题方法。通过09雅思阅读题型分布,雅思命题者的稳中求变思路也得到证实,在上半年的雅思阅读考试中各题型的比例会按照“各题型均匀分布,一多一少现象明显”的趋势发展。因此考生在备考过程中首先需要对雅思阅读各题型的解题思路方法以及技巧十分熟悉,先以分题型单项训练为主,且在练习中加大配对题尤其是段落信息配对题的比重。

5.视野广阔,分数上升。

实践证明,知识面相对较广的考生在雅思考试中能比较好地理解阅读文章的背景,从而较一般考生更为容易和正确地解题。由于雅思阅读取材非常广泛,因此考生在备考的时候一定要注意熟悉一些常考的话题,尤其是较陌生的话题,一定要加强相关的阅读。

以上就是雅思A类阅读备考做到这5点才是基础的全部内容。虽然说对于很多中国考生,雅思阅读是4个考试科目当中最容易进行提升的。但没有正确的备考方法,我们一样无法在有限的备考时间内进行阅读的提升。所以,在备考时,有一个清晰的备考思路和方法是非常重要的。

雅思阅读:语法部分的复习方法

从不直接的考查语法,也不单独的出语法题,而是在语言的交际和交流过程中全面的考察一个人的语言能力,这从来都是雅思考试区别于其他考试的一个优点。但是这并不意味着,语法在雅思考试中不重要,恰恰相反,由于更加重视语法的实际运用而不仅仅是单纯的记忆,雅思考试从某种程度上说对于考生的语法提出了更高的要求。

语法在雅思阅读的复习考试过程中所起到的作用,主要表现在以下几个方面:

一.词汇

雅思阅读对于词汇量要求较高。根据统计,雅思阅读要获得不错的成绩需要掌握5000多个单词,而且其中还以常见的动词、形容词语或名词为主(专有术语和专有名词往往对于解题和理解不会有太多的影响)。对于许多考生而言这在短期内是一个难以逾越的障碍。在克服这点困难上,语法的作用主要体现在以下两个方面;

第一.通过掌握语法中的词法部分,能够很好的帮助学生扩展词汇量。

第二.即便是有某个单词不认识,对于语法有很好掌握的同学也可以利用词法或者句法知识,通过上下文来理解单词的含义。

二.句子

雅思阅读的另一个难点是文章中的长句。在遇到长句的时候,如果对句子的每个部分都不加区分的阅读,既浪费时间,而且也很难快速抓住其主要含义。因此,在遇到长句时,考生要学会利用语法中的句法知识在阅读中学会抓住句子的主干部分,对其进行阅读,而对于句子的修饰补充说明成分可以略过不看。值得注意的是,尽管雅思的文章和句子往往都比较长,但是句子本身理解起来并不难,只要能够分析出主、谓、宾一般就能准确理解起含义。

三.答题

在解题的过程中,语法的作用突出的体现在完成句子题、总结题型(Summary)和简答题这三种题目之中。不提供备选项的完成句子题、总结题和简答题有个共同点,就是答案往往是要根据题目要求和原文信息进行改写,尤其是对于完成句子题和总结题而言,我们根据原文信息所填写的答案必须是要使得整个句子符合语法的。这种改写中往往便渗透了对于语法的考查。即便是对于提供备选项完成句子题和总结题,语法也可以帮助考生筛选备选项,缩小范围,从而提高答对题目的可能性。

比如我们来看一道例题:

The new Nokia handset boasts of a ___ and ____. 这是一道雅思中的阅读完成句子题。通过对于题目的分析我们发现其特点在于两个空格之前只用了一个不定冠词a,这实际上说明这两个空格所填的名词之间存在的某种配套使用的关系。如knife and fork这个词组中尽管是两个名词,但是前面只用一个不定冠词a,以表示成套使用。如果我们能够通过两个空格前的一个不定冠词a判断出它们之间的关系那么解题速度将会大大加快。

复习

在讲完语法在雅思阅读中所起到的作用以后,下面我们来谈谈应该怎样复习语法以为雅思阅读做好准备。

首先、复习语法要抓住一个核心、两条主线。英语句子——作为能表达完整意思的一个最小的语言单位,是人们在交流思想时所使用的语言媒体。因此,对于语法的学习应紧紧以句子为核心,考生们即使在做语法练习的时候,也要学会从语句中找到相应的语言提示或上下文的逻辑关系。语法的本质就是一系列的规则,说明词可以怎样变化以表示不同的含义,以及怎样把词组合成句子。因此,语法复习还要以从句和动词作为两条主线。从句包括:形容词从句(定语从句),副词从句(状语从句),和名词从句(名词性从句);动词内容包括:动词时态,不定式,动名词,分词。但是,值得注意的是,作为语法重要内容的虚拟语气并不是雅思考试阅读的考查重点。此外,与句子构造有关的规则还有主谓一致和主谓倒装。

第二、注重语法运用而非术语的记忆。在正式考试过程中,真正重要和起关键作用的是考生能否准确、快速的分析、理解文章句子含义,题型特点。因此,考生只要能够理解句子含义,不必在语法分析和语法术语上面过多纠缠。

备战雅思阅读:精读和泛读

一、精读泛读材料的选择

在雅思考试备考过程中,几乎所有考生都会完成剑桥真题系列或者是其中比较新的剑5-剑8。剑桥作为雅思考试官方资料,其本身的权威性及参考价值是毋庸置疑的。但是,大家会发现,如果只是泛泛的为了测试分数而应付式的完成这些套题,很多考生是很难得到自己满意的分数的。考生可以把剑桥真题系列当作精读的材料而非单纯为了检测分数而做的套题来对待。在完成这个精读任务的同时,考生想要确实提高英语阅读水平取得满意的成绩,还必需辅以大量的泛读训练。当然,这些泛读材料以国内出版的一些和雅思有关的训练题为佳,因为毕竟这样的一些材料会总结雅思考试的一些常考话题,可以更加有针对性的加强考生的考试水平。如果有一部分考生基本功不扎实,快速阅读此类材料有困难的话,也可以选择一些比较好懂的故事,小说,杂志等进行泛读训练,而分级别的英语读物在书店都可以轻松找到,考生可以自由选择自己级别的读物,这也在一定程度上激发考生的阅读信心和阅读兴趣,使得考生更加主动地去进行泛读训练。

二、精读泛读相结合的益处

精读和泛读相结合可以从词汇、背景知识,以及阅读能力三方面给予考生帮助。

1) 词汇

词汇是阻碍很多考生取得高分的障碍。很多考生会采取背字典的方式来试图补充词汇量。但是,其效果往往不能尽如人意。其实,如果考生能在上下文中记忆词汇不失为一个好方法。所以精读的过程可以很好的帮助考生去扩大绝对词汇量。另外,雅思考试的词汇中有很多考察的并不是它的常用意。考生在精读的过程中去翻查字典,可以了解一个生词的多种含义。但是,死记硬背字典上的很多这个生词的很多条意思,效果往往不那么明显。考生往往还是只能记住精读文章中那个词的含义。这主要是由于没有上下文的问题。这种情况下,泛读可以起到一个很好的弥补这个缺憾。由于涉及面广,同一个词条在不同的语境中出现可以很好的给考生体会词条不同意义的机会,起到加强记忆的作用。

2) 相关的文化背景知识

雅思考试的阅读文章中时常会出现一些考生所不熟悉的一些背景知识。遇到这类情况,考生往往会一头雾水,或者是需要花费很长的时间才能够弄清楚文章的意思。一篇考生熟悉主题的文章和一篇考生完全不了解文化背景的文章,考生完成的情况一定是不一样的。所以在平时多了解西方的一些习俗习惯,文化差异,甚至一些就自己不熟悉的学科领域,都是相当有必要的。而这一目标精读泛读都是必要的。比如一些自然科学类(火山喷发等)或发展史(地图发展史等)一类的文章,绝大多数考生对这些领域比较陌生或者完全没有概念。而这些类型的文章又在考试中重复出现的几率很高,且不是泛泛阅读就可以明白的。解决这一问题的途径当然是要求精读。但是对于一些比较好理解的背景,介于时间精力有限,考生还是可以采取泛读的途径去多了解相关背景。这样在考试时碰到非自己专业领域的文章,考生也不至于无从应对或者浪费很多宝贵时间。

3) 阅读能力

4.我该报名雅思A类还是G类 篇四

我该报名雅思A类还是G类?

丛雅思写作的角度看,A类也好,G类也好,雅思写作都要考议论文,我们经常发现A类和G类的同学议论文相比较来说,可以说非常的相似。所以有一个特点,就是我们经常把G类和A类的同学放在一起学阅读,当然我们对G类同学的阅读会做一些另外的诠释。经过这种分析发现,在我们的课堂上,G类的同学最低的分数在7分。考G类的同学人员很复杂,有很多同学都是十年没有学英语了,其实如此的回答都是给自己一种没信心的暗示。所以大家不要担心这些东西,还是走进课堂来,A类的文章对同学们的要求可能有相应的词汇量作为基础。

所以你在怎样学好A类和G类阅读的时候,你不应该把单词作为一个重大的障碍,应该当成一个重大的事件来处理。即便是一个土生土长的讲英文的人,他也不可能取得这么一个成绩,如果不附着于一个对句子的理解。

现在就遇到了一个最最有区别的项目,就是写作,两篇文章,第一篇文章是一些图表作文,不外乎就是我们讲的饼型图,柱状图,表格乃至于曲线图的这种作文。第二类就是我们说的一篇叙议文,然后是说明文,议论文等。这就是我们讲的A类同学的写作,谈到G类同学的写作,也是两部分,第一部分一般都是应用性的文字,比如说一些求职信,投诉信,还有感谢信类似这样的应用型的文体。第二个作文跟A类可以说是一样的,但是从出题的深度和广度来讲,要远远容易于A类同学的第二部分。

雅思作文万年5.5 模板有用吗

Q:背模板对雅思写作成绩有影响吗?

回答这个问题,需要大家先搞清什么叫做背模板(时下流行用数据来说话,那我就分情况用数据来给大家讲讲模板到底对大家是好还是坏)

模板类型一:填空型模板

适合人群:无法自主在有效时间40分钟内写出一篇大作文

成功概率:24%

推荐指数:负分滚粗

范例

It is undeniable that the specific issue of 题目话题词has become controversial in modern society. However, in spite of those who believe that 非个人观点观点(句), I hold opposite attitude that 文章个人观点(句).

The drawbacks of 文章话题are obvious. Firstly, it should be concerned that 第一个坏处, because this affects 影响什么. Secondly, another upsetting fact is that 第二个缺点, which 产生结果. For example, 举个例子证明.

On the other hand, it is often the case that 个人观点, but when it comes to the benefits of this. For one thing, 第一个好处, because we can see that 好处解释. An increasing number of people including me are convinced that 第二个好处, and because of this, 好处的影响. The most recent evidence indicates that 举例说明.

In conclusion, 话题词 still plays an important role to our society, as it 题目话题的重要性. The benefits and drawbacks depend great on how we apply it in real life. But, the government should take responsibility to 解决方案.

这个类型的模板其实就是把开头段、主体段和结尾段的逻辑类句型写好,大家根据题目进行填写就可以了,找到题目的核心话题和矛盾点进行填写,适当展开进行观点的解释补充和举例,特殊情况下还可以运用捏造数据的方法进行字数的填充。本人在教学历史上也确实用类似的这套模板帮助一个英文基本功在高考60/150分的学生拿到了雅思写作5.5分的成绩,当时是够他出国了。

但是!他的成功概率是比较低的,这么来算一下,一年大陆考区有48雅思考试,按照今年上半年截止到6月底,共进行了24场考试,其中是否同意的文章考的最多,共有48%,其他三种类型偏少,因此模板如果要准备,就只能准备考的最多的这个。而48%的题目中,又有大约一半是A大于B类的,所以不能用,因此只剩下了24%。有人会说这样的概率还是可以的嘛,只要报名四场考试就可以了,运气好的就能考到一场啦。首先这个并不能保证,其次,仅仅是完成四场考试,就需要至少两个半月的时间,有这个时间一套强化课程估计能力都能到6分了。简单来说,并不是所有的问题方式都可以用同一种模板进行,因此选择一种模板来押宝肯定不合适。有的杠精同学就说,我如果背了所有四种文章类型的模板,是不是这个概率问题就解决了?答案还是否定的,因为首先要有人帮你设计四种模板,并且熟练带你去运用,这个过程已经练到了很多文章,浪费的时间足够帮助一个学生成长到这个分数,也是事倍功半的举动。

总结一句话:都90了,还用填空型模板写文章?等考官判令分吗?

模板类型二:句型模板

适合人群:具备完成一篇文章,但是无法写出靓句的学生

成功概率:五五开

推荐指数:比较推荐

范例

With the development of society /with the development science and technology, …

,有一位国内的考生在考场上拿到了雅思写作8分的成绩,他把自己的考试的作品回忆了出来,并且贴到了当时红极一时的雅思学习论坛上。其中,文章出彩的点非常多,但是都被那一句开头给掩盖了:With development of science and technology… 随着科学和技术不断的发展。

令人惊奇的是,自那时开始,这句话便成了接下来十几年雅思写作的万能开头,而四六级的考生也相继中毒,接下来,本世纪代初,高考英语写作也大规模开始陷入“随着科学技术发展”的泥潭。

这句话之所以厉害,其实反映的是当时雅思出题的不合理性,导致很多题目都可以使用科技发展来进行起头,为此雅思第一次改革的时候,扩大雅思题目的范围和话题多样性。这使得这个这个开头已经不可能再使用。时至今日,雅思已经陈述,凡是在使用这个模板句型开头的人都已经把考官笑死在判卷现场,比如考到“女性是否应该参军”这个题目,有的学生文章第一句话是:随着科学技术不断的发展,越来越多的女性开始参军。(笑出猪叫)

除此之外,句型模板还容易产生学生能力和模板句型差距太大的问题,比如:With the development of modern science and technology, people like computer game. 这句话很明显前半句和后半句不是同一个人的作品,这种精分的句子其实考官一看就很清楚哪句是你的水平而哪句是你背诵的。

但是句型模板其实本人依旧推荐,背后的原因是:我们很难要求学生自己写作一个漂亮的句子,创作是不可能的,但是要模仿还是可以的。只要把模板句型吃透,完全理解他的意思或者用法,其实在考场上还是比较容易产生好的效果。

因此,对于句型模板,个人观点是备考学员应该自己在阅读的过程中选取自己水平能及并且符合自己写作习惯的句子,收集到一个本子上,然后在写作中进行练习。不要强求太难得句子,自己读不懂,而且也用不对,那就得不偿失了。

模板类型三:模板

适合人群:有一定英文基本功,但观点,解释和举例能力不强

成功概率:较高

推荐指数:比较推荐

范例

结构模板,其实就是一篇文章要分几段,每段话要写几句话,每句话要承担什么样的责任,都在考试之前给自己规定清楚,甚至有学生都可以规定好自己每句话用什么样的句型。这种学习方法是非常推荐的,因为在考场上可以节约很多思考的时间。

比如例图中的段落分成了开头,正方,反方和个人,并且每段话分别有2-3句话构成,每句话承担着一个中心,解释或者举例的功能。在大脑中行程这样的结构性模板,在考场上只需要思考自己的文章要用那些观点就可以了。其实要成型这样的结构性模板非常简单,线下线上学习,或者自己找到一篇自己喜欢的范文自主进行拆解即可。这种定式的思维模式可以根据文章的话题和类型进行随意调整,出错的可能性特别低。

总之,传统意义的模板对学生的伤害是长期存在的,它伤害了一个学生自主学习能力因为他们会太过于依赖模板,这也很大程度上改变了他们未来的人生观,在任何情况下都希望有“万能手段“来解决人生未来面临的问题。同时,传统的模板无论成功与否都变相的蒙蔽了学生对自己能力的认知,如果成功,他将进入一个自己能力不符的环境,很快被淘汰。如果失败,他将感到受挫,并怀疑自己的能力和付出。

模板就像一种比赛时的兴奋剂,可能使人胜利,德不配位,也可能使人永久退赛,这一切都是当初学习价值观出现了错误。

那个高考60分但是用了我写的模板成功得到雅思写作5.5分,申请去了美国的学生,并没有真正意义上成功。他因为能力跟不上,辗转反复了多个学校,时至今日已经是5年了,大学还没有毕业。这也是本人在执教生涯中最“成功“和最让自己悔恨不已的一次教学事故。

雅思范文:电脑能看藏品后,博物馆和艺廊是否还需要

Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer.有人认为人们能在电脑上看艺术藏品,博物馆和艺廊已经不再需要

Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

参考范文:

There is an argument that it is no longer necessary to have public museums and art galleries as all historical objects and art works can be viewed if people surf the Internet. Personally, I totally disagree with this idea, because visiting physical museums and galleries allows people to experience more fun, and meanwhile, the existence of these places facilitates the development of the local economy.

The reason why I do not believe that public museums and art galleries will disappear even if people can see historical items and works of art by using a computer is that visitors can have more fun when visiting these two venues, which cannot be experienced by online viewing.Many museums have now installed a range of high-tech facilities, including VRequipment, with which visitors can, for example, act as some characters of a particular historical period. Similarly, art galleries also organise different activities, such as painting pictures and making a ceramic object, giving people an interactive and stimulating learning experience.

In addition, museums and art galleries can be seen as tourist attractions of a

city and attract tourists to come, which will boost the local economy. Although some people’s main purpose of travelling is to visit museums or galleries, such as the Palace Museum in Beijing and the Louvre in Paris, they may also tour other places in the city. Thus, revenues can not only be earned from admission charges to museums and art galleries, but from their hotel bookings, tasting local food and buying souvenirs as well.

In conclusion, I am strongly against the viewpoint that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because of the availability of the Internet. This is because without going to these places, people cannot enjoy more fun, and one way of promoting local economic growth may be lost.

雅思写作题目练习:医药公司应花钱帮贫困人口还是应赚钱

雅思写作题目练习:Some people say that drug companies have a responsibility to spend money researching medicines that will help people in poorer countries. Others say the main responsibility of drug companies is to make money.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

雅思写作范文:

There are some people who argue that investing money in making medicines beneficial to residents in less-developed nations is something the drug companies ought to be responsible for. Others, however, disagree, claiming that the ultimate goal of these companies is to earn profits. In this essay, both ideas will be analysed before my perspective is given, which is that pharmaceutical corporations should both offer poor people assistance and make money for themselves.

It is justified tosee the provision of medicines for people in economically-disadvantaged countries as it can prevent viruses from spreading widely to finally build a better world. If drug companies strive to conduct research and make affordable medicines, inhabitants in deprived areas may not die because they lack sufficient money to buy medicines when suffering from diseases. Thus, viruses will be controlled in a timely manner and not affect other regions of the globe. In other words, people in the entire world can lead a peaceful and healthy life.

On the other hand,however, it is the pursuit of economic benefit that is of great importance to drug enterprises because this facilitates their smooth operation. It is widely accepted that the cost of developing new medicines and purchasing equipment is quite high, investors’ benefits have to be considered and employees’ salaries need to be paid on time. With the ability to make money, these organisations would not findit difficult to cover the wide variety of huge expenditure mentioned;otherwise, the existence of these companies could not be expected.

5.雅思A类7.5分感言 篇五

2013年11月16日雅思A类大作文范文

——来自环球雅思慎浩老师

题目:Across recent world, only a few languages are increasing in use, while some(=287 words)

范文:

第一段:社会背景+正向观点+自己观点

社会背景(全球化+经济融合-----有效交流的基石-----互通有无 +多边贸易)+正向观点(某些语言蓬勃发展—优点>缺点)+自己观点(某些语言普及-------国家间经济相互交流)

Nowadays, along with globalization and economic integration, certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of countries, as the corner stone of available communication between countries, further some languages instead of that of various ones outweigh its demerits.After thoughtful consideration, I am convinced that a few languages being are in service of 如今,伴随着全球化以及经济一体化,大多数国家认可与接受的某些语言,作为各国有效沟通的基石,促进多国的贸易以及互通有无。因此,一些人认为 一些语言蓬勃发展而不是各种语言的蓬勃发展的优点远超过其缺点。深思熟虑之后,我认为一些语言的普及和应用有利于国家之间经济的相互交流。

句子分析:

Nowadays, along with globalization and economic integration, further 状语:Along with : 伴随。。adv

主语: Certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of 语法:Certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of :Adj +N +done +介宾结构 = adj + N +adj +adv

as the corner stone of available communication between countries:插入语

作为国家之间有效交流的基石

谓语:Further vt 促进

宾语:Mutual exchange of needed products and multilateral trades

Mutual exchange of needed products n 互通有无

Multilateral tradesn 多边贸易

作为国家之间有效交流的基石

第二段:论点 +论据+例证+结论

论点(主语:支持观点:少数语言使用-----国家间的经济互补以及合作)+论据(没有语言作为有效媒介------无法正常进行---经济合作与交流)+例证(英语 –起不可替代作用 1 提升沟通效率 2 解决矛盾纠纷)+结论(普及某些语言优势明显)

On one hand, popularization and application of some languages facilitate economic complementation and between countries better.without languages as media to enhance effective communicating, economic cooperation and the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries plays an irreplaceable role in terms of enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively.From this point, the superiorities of popularizing some languages applied broadly are prominent.一方面,(论点)一些语言的普及和应用更好地促进国家间的经济的互补与合作。(论据)换句话说,没有促进有效沟通的语言作为媒介,国家间的经济合作与交流不能正常运行。(例证)例如,英语,作为最广泛使用的语言,被大多数国家使用对于极大地加强国家之间沟通的效率以及有效解决跨国企业之间矛盾与分歧起了不可替代的作用。(结论)从这个角度讲,普及一些广泛使用语言的优势是凸显的。

句子分析:

English, as the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries plays an irreplaceable role in terms of enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively.主语:

English, as the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries

N,同位语,done +prep +n =N, 同位语,adj + adv

谓语:

plays an irreplaceable role : 起了不可替代的作用

宾语:

Enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively

解析:adv 修饰 doing

极大地加强国家之间沟通的效率以及有效解决跨国企业之间矛盾与分歧

第三段

让步段(另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳)

(另一种观点:多元文化丧失+对此反驳观点:加快语言发展成为必然趋势 原因 1 多元文化融合规避不必要的纠纷与分歧)

On the other hand, a series of issues also arise out of only utilizing a few languages,such as forfeit of diverse cultures, which exerts irretrievable deficiency toward diverse development across the world.However, accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used turns out to be the irreversible tendency, in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.另一方面,仅仅使用某些语言会引发一系列的问题,例如多元文化的丧失,对世界多元化的发展造成无法弥补的损失。然而,促进某些广泛使用的语言的发展成为不可逆转的趋势,鉴于各国多元化发展的更好的融合以及规避由过多的使用不同的语言引发的不必要的争论和分歧。

句子分析:

Accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used turns out to be the irreversible tendency, in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.主语:

Accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used

促进某些广泛使用的语言的发展

Doing + N +定语从句

谓语

Turn out to be vt 成为

宾语

the irreversible tendency 不可逆转的趋势

状语:

in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.In the view of + better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages

鉴于+各国多元化发展的更好的融合以及规避由过多的使用不同的语言引发的不必要的争论和分歧

第四段: 总结全文观点

(支持观点:促进语言发展符合社会发展趋势原因:社会经济更好的发展)On balance, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view/ that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.总而言之,在概括以上观点之后,我持有这样的观点认为促进符合当今社会发展趋势的某些语言体现出不可比拟的优越性,考虑到对于更好的促进经济以及社会发展的作用。

句子分析:

after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.状语:

after summarizing what is outlined above:介宾结构做状语

主语谓宾: I hold the point of view

宾语从句:

that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.主语:

furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society

谓语:is mainly embodied in 主要体现

宾语:incomparable superiority 不可替代优势

上一篇:项目部物资管理暂行规定下一篇:高中课代表竞选发言稿