时评写作训练学案一

时评写作训练学案一（3篇）

1.时评写作训练学案一 篇一

【原题再现】

阅读下面一则《广州日报》的新闻，按照下面的要求作文。

纪录电影《厉害了，我的国》掀观影热潮（有删节）

昨日，大型纪录电影《厉害了，我的国》在影院公映。暨南大学艺术学院老师卫铁是本片的导演，在接受广州日报记者采访时，卫铁表示，影片不仅有对国家取得辉煌成绩集中展现，更多的是对一个个普通人崭新精神面貌的刻画：“努力去做一个奋斗者，是这部电影最希望呈现给观众的。”

《厉害了，我的国》从圆梦工程、创新驱动、协调发展、绿色中国、共享小康、开放中国等多个角度对中国过去5年所取得的辉煌成就进行集中展示。“振华30号”完成港珠澳大桥最后吊装、国产大飞机C919首飞、“复兴号”动车组率先实现350公里时速的运营，首个太空实验站“天宫二号”如期升空等一个个振奋人心的画面，汇聚成振奋人心的美丽画卷。

在各自的岗位上兢兢业业的平凡人则汇聚成一组动人乐章：上门帮居民联络家庭医生的工作人员，搭建起全科医生与居民之间的桥梁；筑起全世界最大人工林的坝上三代人；勤勤恳恳为孩子奉献的乡村教师；平均年齡只有30多岁的科技创新团队等，让观众为之动容。片中一个在埃塞俄比亚中国工业园工作的非洲年轻人还给自己起了个中文名叫“广州”。

影片上映后，广州掀起观影热潮。昨日是元宵佳节，《厉害了，我的国》成为最受欢迎的电影之一。记者特地前往岗顶天娱广场的天河电影城，早上9时多，影院里已经人潮涌动，10时的早场电影上座率达到90%。据介绍，上映首日全城共有133家影院放映545场，早在前晚，翌日多个场次的电影票就已售罄，正佳飞扬影院、青宫电影城、天河电影城等多个热门影院的多个场次满场，甚至出现一票难求的盛况。

卫铁认为这些是影片能够吸引年轻观众的地方：“年轻人应该走出虚拟空间，去看看祖国的变化，因为这些变化与每个人的生活都息息相关。”

卫铁表示，充满正能量的影片之所以能受到观众喜爱，与国家的国力的增长息息相关：“国力提升了，文化必然繁荣，观众自然愿意支持能够体现出文化自信的好作品，这就对有责任感、使命感的文艺工作者提出了更高的要求。”

阅读以上新闻你有什么感慨，请结合个人生活实际写一篇不少于800字的作文。

要求：选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭。

【立意解析】

这是一道时评类的材料作文，材料是“厉害了，我的国”，注意从材料中选取立意的角度立意，并且联系自己的生活实际思考。可从以下角度立意：

1、为中国骄傲；

2、努力做个奋斗者；

3、平凡人成就非凡国；

3、走出虚拟世界，感受国之变化与国俱进，增强使命感；

4、提升文化自信，支持正能量。

行文时要通过对材料的分析引出观点，然后结合现实和自己的实际论证，体现自己的思考，做到观点明确，层次清晰。

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【写作提示】

时评写作，最重要的是就事论事，就是针对时事本身进行直接的评论。

从内容上看，有三种类别：一种是“赞扬式”，即对新闻中的人物、事件、工作方法等表示肯定，然后阐述肯定的理由；二是“批评式”，即对新闻中的人物、事件、工作方法等进行否定，然后从法律、道德等方面找出否定的依据；三是“建议式”，即提出自己对新闻中某个问题的建设性意见。

从写法上看，有“就事论事”和“就事论理”两类。就事论事，就是按照事物本身的性质来评定是非得失，不要求作过多的材料外的拓展和延伸，主要就材料本身进行评议，发表自己的看法，能言之有理，持之有据。就事论理，是对所评之事进行具体深入的分析，充分说理，阐明一个道理，而不是停留在就事论事上，以达到扶正祛邪，激浊扬清的写作目的。

时评写作应注意讲究“时效性、针对性、准确性、说理性、思想性”，尤其是讲究“准确性”和“说理性”。【例文导写】

中国骄傲

中华民族是一个优秀的民族，中国的历史上英雄辈出，在我们身边不断涌现出许多可歌可泣的英雄。英雄其实就是普通人。但是在生死攸关的一瞬间，他们挺身而出，牺牲了自己的生命也在所不惜。于是，一个个普普通通的小人物，就变成了我们心中大英雄！

他们是一群和我们一样普通的不能再普通的人，但却以超乎寻常的勇气，担负起维护生命尊严的职责；以沉着冷静的智慧，化解一次又一次的危机；以纯朴的情感、顽强的意志，诠释了新时代“英雄”的含义。

今年7月11日，在南京市江宁区东山街道打工的朱柱（泗洪县双沟人）从南京市东山街道的“老东山桥”上路过时，看见一个女青年从南边的“观光桥”上跳入水中。朱柱一边打电话报警，一边奔向女青年的跳水处，刚到河边，朱柱就仓促地脱下脚上的一只解放鞋，这是只见女青年的身体动了一下，朱柱来不及脱下第二只鞋就跳进了河里救人。轻生女青年最后经闻讯赶来的当地民警和众人奋力救上了岸，并送往医院抢救，脱离了危险，而朱柱却不幸溺水身亡。为了救助一位素昧平生的落水女青年，朱柱现出了年仅26岁的宝贵生命。朱柱，一个身材矮小，体格瘦弱，其貌不扬，生活在城市的底层的人。但，就是这样一个普普通通的农民工，面对危在旦夕的轻生女孩，却第一个跳入水中。

在祖国西南四川省，有一个小县城，在这个县城里有一个普普通通的邮递员叫王顺友。从1985年开始，他就在大山里奔波送信，这一送就是二十年。那个县城里，很难找到一块平地，除了山还是山。全县29个乡镇中，23个不通电话，16个没有电，交通也很不方便，王顺友只能步行给部分乡镇送信，邮件只能用马驮，非常艰苦。王顺友每天的工作就是牵着自己的马，把信件送到山里人的手中，他从家里出发开始送信，到送完信在回到家中，整整需要十四天！也就是说，在这十四天里，他只能露宿山间。在他送信的二十多年里，经历的艰辛、困苦、孤独时难以想象的。有时候为了保护邮件，经受生与死的考验。有一次为了保护邮件他被马踢中肚子，差点丢了生命。二十多年来，他从来没有延误过一个班期，没有丢失过一份邮件，投递准确率达100%。他，一位在平凡的岗位上做出不平凡贡献的人……

他们在我心中是伟大的，是神圣的，是我心中的英雄，是民族的脊梁，是当之无愧的中国骄傲！中国需要这样的英雄……

中国因为有这样的英雄而骄傲。

2.时评写作训练学案一 篇二

高一英语组 学案

（一）I.根据汉语提示写单词

1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.There must be something wrong with the ________(引擎)of my car.This ________(生物)lives in the depth of the ocean.Every child should take part in ________(体育的)sports to build up their body._________(旅游业)is a big industry in Spain.We’re in the _________(少数)；more people are against us than with us.The room is 4 metres in width and 6 metres in ________(长度).________(无论哪里)you go or whatever you do, I’ll be right here waiting for you.DNA is different from person to person-it’s ________(独特的)to each person.Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck are among the best-known ________(卡通)character.10.The society was set up to ________(保护)endangered species from extinction.II．根据汉语提示写出短语

1._________________ 以…而闻名2._________________ 根据…模仿

3._________________ 提前4._________________ 实现

5._________________ 难怪；不足为奇6._________________ 面对面

7._________________ 接近8._________________ 活跃起来

9._________________ 不仅仅；不只是10._________________ 参加 III.选择以上短语填空（有两个多余选项）

1．____________________ you are tired.You’ve been working for hours.2.It’s a little cheaper if you book the tickets ____________________.3.A small donation can help make a child’s wish ____________________.4.Sixteen schools have agreed to _________________ the program so far.5.When I mentioned our plans for a trip abroad, the kids _________________at once.6.Hiking is a great way to travel.You may _________________ nature and take exercise at the same time.7.Switzerland _________________ its watch making and beautiful scenery.8.I’d prefer to talk _________________ rather than talk on the phone.IV.英译汉

1.Whichever and whatever you like, there is a theme park for you!

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2.With all these attractions, no wonder tourism is increasing wherever there is a Disneyland._____________________________________________________

3.To enter a world of fantasy about ancient England, come to Camelot Park!_______________________________________________________________

4.Futuroscope is not only for individuals, but is also the perfect mix of fun and learning for class outings.________________________________________________________________

4.If driving, Futuroscope is within easy reach of the freeway.________________________________________________________________ V.汉译英

1.预订票要便宜一些。(in advance)

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2.难怪你累了呢，你一直走了好几个小时。(no wonder)

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3.那个少言寡语的姑娘自从当上售货员后变得活跃起来。(come to life)

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4.她以自己母亲为榜样。(model…after)

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5.教堂在学校附近。(close to)

________________________________________________________________ VI.阅读理解

B

Florence Nightingale（南丁格尔）was born in a rich family.When she was young she took lessons in music and drawing, and read great books.She also traveled a great deal with her mother and father.As a child she felt that visiting sick people was both a duty and a pleasure.She enjoyed helping them.At last mind was made up.“I’m going to be a nurse,” she decided.“Nursing isn’t the right work for a lady,” her father told her.“Then I will make it so, “she smiled.And she went to learn nursing in Germany and France.When she returned to England, Florence started a nursing home for home.During the Crimean War in 1854 she went with a group of thirty eight nurses to the front hospitals.What they saw there was terrible.Dirt and death were everywhere to

be seen — and smelled.The officer there did not want any woman to tell him how to run a hospital, either.But the brave nurse went to work.Florence used her own money and some from friends to buy clothes, beds, medicine and food for the men.Her only pay was in smiles from the lips of dying soldiers.But they were more than enough for this kind woman.After she returned to England, she was honored for her services by Queen Victoria.But Florence said that her work had just begun.She raised money to build the Nightingale Home for Nurses in London.She also wrote a book on public health, which was printed in several countries.Florence Nightingale died at the age of ninety, still trying to serve others through her work as a nurse.Indeed, it is because of her that we honor nurses today.66.When she was a child, Florence ____.A.loved to travel very muchB.knew what her duty in life was

C.loved to help the sick peopleD.was most interested in music and drawing

67.What made Florence make up her mind to become a nurse？

A.Her father’s support.B.Her desire to help the sick.C.Her education in Germany and France.D.Her knowledge from reading great books.68.During the Crimean War in 1854, Florence served in the front hospital where ____.A.she earned a little moneyB.work was very difficult

C.few soldiers died because of her work D.she didn’t have enough food or clothes

69.Why was Florence honored by Queen Victoria？

A.She built the Nightingale Home for Nurses.B.She wrote a book on public health.C.She worked as a nurse all her life.D.She did a great deal of work during the Crimean War.70.The passage can best be described as ____.A.the life story of a famous womanB.a description of the nursing work

C.an example of successful educationD.the history of nursing in EnglandC

Valencia is in the east part of Spain(西班牙).It has a port on the sea, two miles away on the coast.It is the capital of a province that is also named Valencia.The city is a market centre for what is produced by the land around the city.Most of the city’s money is made from farming.It is also a busy business city, with ships, railways, clothes and machine factories.Valencia has an old part with white buildings, colored roofs, and narrow streets.The modern part has long, wide streets and new buildings.Valencia is well known for its parks and gardens.It has many old churches and museums.The University in the centre of the city was built in the 13th century.The city of Valencia has been known since the 2nd century.In the 8th century it was the capital of Spain.There is also an important city in Venezuela(委内瑞

拉)named Valencia.71.From the text, how many places have the name Valencia?

A.One.B.Two.C.Three.D.Four.72.What is the main difference between the two parts of the city?

A.The color of the buildings.B.The length of the streets.C.The age of the buildings.D.The color of the roofs.73.When was Valencia the most important city in Spain?

A.2nd century.B.8th century.C.13th century.D.20th century.74.What is Valencia famous for?

A.Its seaport.B.Its University.C.Its churches and museums.D.Its parks and gardens.75.The main income of the city of Valencia is from its_____.A.markets.B.business.C.factories.D.farming.D

Nearly all our food comes from the soil.Some of us eat meat, of course, but animals live on plants.If there were no plants, we would have no animals and no meat.So the soil is very necessary for life.The top of the ground is usually covered with grass or other plants.There may be dead leaves and dead plants on the grass.The waste matter(粪)from animals also falls on it.All soil needs food.If we do not give it any, the plants will be weak.Farmers found that animals’ waste is the best food for the soil, but chemical fertilizers(化肥)are also very useful.The same crop(庄稼)should not be grown in the same place every year;it’s better to have a different crop.A change of crop and the use of a good fertilizer will keep the land good.76.What would happen first without plants?

A.People would have more crops.B.Animals would die.C.There would be more food.D.There would be less soil.77.What does the writer tell us in the first paragraph(段落)?

A.Leaves, plants, grass and waste live on each other.B.There would be no animals without meat.C.There would be no plants without animals.D.People, animals, plants and soil live on each other.78.Which is the best food for soil in the field?

A.Chemical fertilizers B.Plants and grass.C.Animals’ waste.D.Different crops.79.Why do we often grow a different crop in the same place every year?

A.Because we can keep the soil rich this way.B.Because we don’t have enough land.C.Because we want to have a different food.D.Because we do this as a habit.80.What is the best title for the passage?

A.Soil and WasteB.Plants and Animals

C.Food and WasteD.Soil and Food

Unit 5 Theme parks

高一英语组 学案

（一）参考答案

I.1.engine2.creature3.athletic4.Tourism5.minority

6.length7.Wherever8.unique9.cartoon10.preserve

II.1.be famous for2.be modelled after 3.in advance 4.come true5.no wonder

6.face to face7.get close to8.come to life 9.more than 10.take part inIII.1.No wonder2.in advance3.come true4.take part in

5.came to life6.get close to7.is famous for8.face to face

IV.1.不论你喜欢哪个，喜欢什么，总有适合你的主题公园。

2.有这么多引人入胜的东西，难怪哪里有迪斯尼乐园，哪里的旅游业就有发展。

3.想进入古英格兰的梦幻世界吗？那就来默洛特公园吧！

4.“观测未来”不仅仅适合（旅游），也适合学生全班出游，因为他是娱乐和学习完美的结合。

5.如果开车，“观测未来”就在高速公路附近。

3.时评写作训练学案一 篇三

一沪教版

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件 物质的溶解性

教学目标：

知识与技能：、了解结晶现象及其在生产、生活中的应用；

2、以结晶实验入手，了解几种可溶性固态物质的混合物，根据它们在一种溶剂里溶解度的不同，采取分离的手段；

过程与方法：、学生在“复习---问题---实验”的教学过程中，获取知识，运用知识。

2、学生进行交流讨论、探究实验等过程中培养自我观察、总结等能力。

情感态度与价值观：、训练学生的实验动手能力。

2、对学生进行理论与实际相结合的教育，树立学以致用的观念。

学习重难点：

、建立结晶的概念。

2、运用冷却热饱和溶液和结晶的方法来分离混合物。

学习重难点：

运用结晶的方法来分离混合物。

教学过程：

教学环节

教师调控

学生活动

设计意图

提问复习

引入新课

混合物分离方法

应用

学生谈感想

教师小结

什么叫溶解度？物质的溶解度是如何随着温度的变化而变化的呢？

设置疑问：能否将溶解的溶质从溶液中取出来？

提示：物质溶解在水中，必变什么条件能使物质析出来？

追问：改变温度，方法正确，但应选取用什么样的溶液更为有利，更合适呢？

归纳总结学生的回答

追问：是不是冷却热饱和溶液的方法适用于所有的物质形成的溶液呢？

归纳总结此方法的适用范围

介绍----另一种分离混合物的方法

抛出结晶的定义、包含的范围

海水晒盐

你有什么收获？

将本节课重点展示出来

知识再现

回忆回答

学生分组讨论

小组汇报结果

思考、回答问题

分组讨论

各组汇报讨论方案

思考回答

阅读教材P21活动与探究

学生分组讨论

归纳总结

阅读教材P22

谈收获

学生进行相应的知识点的整理工作。

复习上节课所学知识，引入新课。

与前一节知识有联系的地方，知识的逆向思维的体现。

学生一定能联系到降低温度。

介绍蒸发结晶的方法以及它的适用范围，与冷却热饱和溶液的方法对应的记忆，使不同层次的学生都在交流中有收获。

板书设计：

一．物质的结晶

．晶体与结晶

（1）晶体：是从溶液中析出的具有规则的几何外形的固体

（2）结晶：在一定条件下，在溶液中析出晶体的过程称为结晶。

2．结晶的方法

（1）蒸发溶剂法：适用于溶解度受温度影响较小的的固体溶质，即缓升型的物质。如蒸发海水获得食盐；

（2）冷却热饱和溶液法：或称降温结晶法。适用于溶解度受温度影响较大的固体溶质。如冷却热的硝酸钾饱和溶液来获取硝酸钾晶体

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